Another Short Story
I wrote another short story, and I've decided that in the order to promote the interests of internet democracy, I will allow you, my blog readers (all four of you), to submit comments to it if you so desire. The window for comments from when I post this to next Monday at 5pm. If you read the story and have any feedback to offer, please do so before then.
The story: I Hate Mondays, ~3600 words, short story
update (8/29/05): closed to online feedback. Thank you to both of you for your positive comments!
I accept all forms of commentary, from the nitpicky grammar to the overarching theme and plot. Comments are accepted in the following formats:
· telephone dictation (the answering works, BTW)
· red pen scrawled on a printout and delivered to me (postal address works, too)
· red pen scrawled on a printout, scanned, and emailed to me
· blog comments
examples:
page 1 "I'm looking for a book." -> "I am looking for a book."
or
"I hate your stupid story, you stupid git, you suck"
(not recommended)
or
"I believe that your story suffers from a confusion between the
eschatological essence of being and the non-universal concept of
self-awareness as the apriori cause of conciousness."
(not recommended either)
I look forward to hearing your feedback.
The story: I Hate Mondays, ~3600 words, short story
update (8/29/05): closed to online feedback. Thank you to both of you for your positive comments!
I accept all forms of commentary, from the nitpicky grammar to the overarching theme and plot. Comments are accepted in the following formats:
· telephone dictation (the answering works, BTW)
· red pen scrawled on a printout and delivered to me (postal address works, too)
· red pen scrawled on a printout, scanned, and emailed to me
· blog comments
examples:
page 1 "I'm looking for a book." -> "I am looking for a book."
or
"I hate your stupid story, you stupid git, you suck"
(not recommended)
or
"I believe that your story suffers from a confusion between the
eschatological essence of being and the non-universal concept of
self-awareness as the apriori cause of conciousness."
(not recommended either)
I look forward to hearing your feedback.
-- Vincent Jørgensen @ 8/23/2005 10:49:00 AM
5 comments
5 Comments:
great story, and no typos to be found. good job. best of luck with the publishers.
I really enjoyed it, I don't know what comments to make, I did keep thinking you were going to have them have a moral decision if they should contact the FBI ala the patriot act. I really did I mean library and nukes etc.
-Carol
I don't know. Do you really think a librarian would turn somebody in to the feds? More importantly, would this librarian? Maybe he would threaten it, but he wouldn't actually do it.
Yeah I doubt it, but we all are torn between doing the right thing and following the rules at one time or another.
Comments are now closed. Thank you to both of you for your positive feedback.
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